Brown Eyed Girl

Hey, Great poem. It's short and to the point and that makes it very appealing to me. Maybe another verse would just top it off nicely maybe a contrast to ...

He thinks I’m someone I never claimed to be Like some glamorous model on T.V He calls me cute, lovely and gorgeous He makes me think I’m flawless He doesn’t ...

hey I'm Brown Eyed Girl, I'm soooooo happy I found this poem, i absolutely love it! Somethings I struggle to put into words what I really think you like been ...

Hey, cool user name by the way! LUV THIS POEM! great, great, great idea 4 a poem and I'm just slightly envious u thought of it first! =] But i ...

Hey, I like the idea in this poem it's cool and I totally get what your trying to say. Maybe bit more varied vocab and some good imagery and you've ...

Hey, I really like this piece I couldn't stop reading it! I came across you randomly but I'm so glad I did. I thought your writing is so realistic and ...

I was once told that you must write what you know, I know quite a lot for a 14 year old. If your going to be a writer you must ...

My ceiling has a pattern in it Or so it seems to me Like fury of a teddy bear Or a tune in a melody Sleepless nights sure do make ...